Describe the setting! (Year 3)

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Describe the setting! (Year 3)

Post  Administrator on Wed Nov 17, 2010 2:15 am

Describe what you can see, feel, hear and touch. Don't forget to use capital letters and full stops!


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Post  Goulden on Wed Nov 17, 2010 2:28 am

The powder white sand fell through my fingers and felt as soft as a pillow.

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My description

Post  Goulden on Fri Feb 04, 2011 4:09 am

The bright blue waves crash onto the soft golden sand.

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my homework

Post  israel on Mon Feb 14, 2011 10:19 am

The sand is so bright that it felt like little rocks in my hand as it slowly fell out of my hand.it look like a nice home with a fresh smell of flowers.

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Post  justin on Tue Feb 15, 2011 10:27 am

The sand is so soft and so sweet it feels so comfe.the sea is like a pool of cooling sen sashonule water and is good for cooling off if your feeling very very very warm and it's so relaxing.The touch is sensashonule the smell is so sweet i want to be thear for a good treat

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Post  Dorcas on Tue Feb 15, 2011 12:02 pm

The fluffy clouds
The warm hot sun
The light blue sea
The green flowing trees
The beautiful midday sky
The yellow soft sand

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Post  callum on Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:47 am

i would go there eny time i wont to it is so good
the nice blue sky
the amazing stream
the nice smelly coconut trees
the amazing gold sand
the amazing fluffy clouds

i would go there if i was able to go
if any one would go i would be joulse

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Post  jake on Wed Feb 16, 2011 10:33 am

i felt the sand slip through my fingers like a soft pillow.
i heard the the sea splashing as if it was splashing against my face.
i heard the wind blowing against my face it felt like fresh air against my face.
i went into the sea i walked into it,it was like walking into heaven.






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homework/i think/

Post  anton sa on Wed Feb 16, 2011 10:50 am


when u see the sun it melts through you keeping u warm oh what a treat
when you dip the tip of a toe in the water it feels so sweat oh what a treat
when you feel the wind it makes u want to feel so neet oh what a treat
when u look at the sky you become shy as the birds began to tweet oh what a treat.




p.s:i tried to write a poem sir hope you like it

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Re: Describe the setting! (Year 3)

Post  kieron.s on Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:31 am

When i feel the lush golden sand i fell happy , the sun is shining like a the biggiest light bulb in the world!
When the warm sea water reaches my toes is shiver like a mouse in winter.
When the coconuts drop off the tree the birds start to sing.

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Home work

Post  Misha on Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:32 am

The fluffy clouds and the bright sun shinying.
The green tree and the blue sky.
The sand is as bright as the sun.

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callum & helmand

Post  cal hell on Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:35 am

i carnt belive that there are mountains in the back ground it is like im in the carabean
if i touch the sand i think it will feel so soft
the clouds are so fluffy and beatiful that it is like im in heaven
i love the lovly light green palm trees
and i whish i lived there all my life
because of the setting that is there

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Re: Describe the setting! (Year 3)

Post  louis on Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:36 am

thiis louis
the sae was beautiful like the sun melting the man went on beach the sand was very hot and it was melting. saw fast you cud put your finger on it and it can melt saw fast

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Describe the setting

Post  Maliha on Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:32 pm

The blazing sun shone over the glamorous beach !!!!! The shimmering blue sea waves crashed into the golden bright sand!!!!! The fluffy white clouds were as soft as an angels wings!!!!!!! The sweet tasty coconut water is as delicious as candy!!!!!!!! The never ending dark green palm trees flowed across the beach !!!!!!!!!! The royal blue sky is as pretty as one thousand diamonds!!!!!


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